tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999087140168972513.post5283523400051328031..comments2023-07-20T02:33:37.263-07:00Comments on Whimsical Journeys: Analysis of "Violent Media Is Good For Kids" By: Gerard Joneskarysahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05897223417760961564noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999087140168972513.post-30128766778552498152016-01-07T01:18:19.033-08:002016-01-07T01:18:19.033-08:00His ultimate point is that violence in media CAN b...His ultimate point is that violence in media CAN be used as a helpful resource for young people as means for an outlet. The author couldn't possibly cite ALL possible source of violence, violence IS violence whatever it's justification may be. He could have emphasized this more forcefully by indicating that this method although could be useful it needs to be controlled. Everything in moderation. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16987503445760521398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999087140168972513.post-11134799807356588622015-10-24T21:01:20.847-07:002015-10-24T21:01:20.847-07:00Clearly, his "persuasive" article has de...Clearly, his "persuasive" article has definitely persuaded you. I'm to write a critique essay on this article and one of the major things that shouldn't be ignored is the lack of evidence. He did included his personal experience, his son's experience and the tomboy girl's experience as a way to back up his point. However, he lacks support for what he means by violent media. He simply referred to those characters who've done justice right after beating up bad guys, but he never mentioned others, which he should have, since he did mention "bloody and violent video games" etc. in his article. He failed to expand on the actual realistic violence displayed in video games such as God of War or Grand Theft Auto, which not only display violence, but nudity, strong language, and other things that are "unsafe" for children. <br /><br />I like those games, btw. I'm sorta practicing on what to say on my essay, exactly why I wrote a rant-like thing lol I'll show myself out.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00202913742202778080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2999087140168972513.post-72645462214179951802015-10-06T10:28:39.573-07:002015-10-06T10:28:39.573-07:00Nice summary !!Nice summary !!Dan Danhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07672949673581775394noreply@blogger.com